We are learning
to recount events that happened in the past.
We know we can do
this when we can:
Follow the Writing
Process
Have a title
Write: an
orientation telling when, who, what and where the event happened, a
sequence of events and a personal comment to conclude the recount
Use the past tense
Use a lot of
different descriptive words to make our recount more interesting
Start my sentences
in different ways
Next Step:
Compete the writing process by editing for full stops and capital letters
and then publish my own work.
The Snowy Dragon
By Pou
My toes were numb
and icy. Whoosh went the wind. Dragon smoke came out of my
dragon mouth. My ears felt numb too. My nose was frozen. I
could see snow coming out of the sky. The clouds moved slowly like
snowflakes. Black tree branches reached out into the sky. I opened
the back door of my house and went inside. After that I had a warm
milo. It tasted nice. It was a great holiday.
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